Sunday, November 6, 2011

The Secret

This poem is a view of my own death in the future. It is not meant to be morbid or dark. As a matter of fact, I think of it as being rather positive. These events take place many years from now. It is not in the near future. I hope "The Secret" challenges each reader to carefully evaluate what he/she will leave behind once they depart this world. Finally, "The Secret" is written in the voice of my daughter Ary Anna.


My daddy died just the other day
Family came from miles away
To see him bow upon his stage
To turn his final page

Before he passed we all gathered ‘round
Each one stood up, no one set down
All were eager, yearning to hear
Some words of wisdom he’d learned through the years

We children pressed in to breathe of his breath
Before he closed his eyes in death
Hoping some part of him would remain
And as we breathed in we felt his pain

He opened his eyes and looked at our faces
Smiling to see us all in our places
Oldest to youngest, girls and guys
Softly I wiped the tears from his eyes

Over on the opposite side of the bed
My sweet, tender mother stroked his cool head
We were all there—every last one
Loving wife, beautiful daughters, handsome sons

Through the years my dear, sweet mother stood by his side
When there was no hope—no light in his eyes
She was his life. She was his breath
Now in sweet peace he could face death

My oldest brother—he is so bright
God gave him the gift to write
Years ago into the night sky daddy did stare
Seth is the answer to my daddy’s prayer

My next two brothers—not quite as old
Grew to be wise—grew to be bold
To practice medicine they both did strive
Now they have saved countless a life

My fourth brother went off to war
To help his uncle settle a score
“To the enemy,” daddy said, “you must not yield”
My daddy's son came home carrying his shield


My younger sister is Abby Jo
Bravely she treads where others won’t go
Just like my daddy—she’s almost fearless
But unlike my daddy—she’s almost tearless

My youngest brother—William Wallace by name
Didn’t seek fortune, didn’t seek fame
He dared to step beyond the church steeple
He gave his life to save a nation of people

Like my mother I’ve stayed by daddy’s side
When he laughed I laughed, when he cried I cried
I gave him wisdom, he gave me life
And now I’ve become a godly mother and wife

We all stood there as we recounted
The stories of our lives and the love that abounded
Then daddy quietly whispered, “Do you all see?”
“The secret to life… leave a legacy.”

With those words he breathed his last breath
His heart stopped beating inside his chest
But in each of us he still breathes
For we are his legacy

My daddy was first—he was a pilgrim
He and mom raised up godly children
So we’ll pass his breath to future generations
And daddy will touch so many nations

Daddy was right—it is up to us, you see
We each must leave our own legacy

Allen Bennett

4 comments:

  1. Allen,

    Not to bad there buddy!

    Metalbender

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  2. Why, thank you very much, Metalbender. I take that as a high complement. Thanks for dropping by. Come by again soon.

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  3. What a beutiful poem, it brought tears to my eyes! You have a way with words,Allen. Keep writing you have a great gift and I so enjoy reading them.

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  4. Very nice, I enjoyed this a lot.

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